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Riverside Walk (Colour version)

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Color version of the riverside landscape drawing in the U.K
Image size
2887x3765px 7.56 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
SAMSUNG ES9/SAMSUNG ES8
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.9
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jun 12, 2015, 9:32:21 AM
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is a fine composition you've presented. For one thing, your mark making skills are amazing in this composition. You manage to incorporate these line marks throughout the piece to give more of a sense of texture rather than having the piece seem stationary. You also use some interesting color combinations to help bring out each individual object in this piece, such as how you manage to transition some earth reds as shadows to the branches on your trees. While I'm impressed with the composition, I do have some suggestions. Try to add a few more resting places for the eyes as this composition does cause a large amount of eye movement. You should also try to add a bit more atmospheric perspective to the background as to give more depth where objects, such as the tree branches, don't merge with one another. You do well with your palette and your line quality. You've done a marvelous work, and I know you'll continue to do well for yourself. I hope you keep producing high quality works.